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#72535 by Debbiestrange
Fri Jun 26, 2009 12:22 am
Ok...for all you Michigan bands and artists...you might want to check this out. There is a movie being made...not far from where I live and they are seeking original music from unsigned bands....Here is the link to check it out:

http://annabelleandbear.com

the move is about a junkie...who suddenly has custody of his daughter...

I wrote this song specifically for this movie because they want something that melodically will play through the movie. I thought, "I can do this"...Remember the move Juno? That song...a guy playing the guitar...that song became a huge hit...anyways...This is what I wrote...I uploaded it to my player...it's the first one on my list: "I See Me" Here are the lyrics:

I See Me
By Debbie Strange, 2009©
I don’t know which way I should go
I’m walking down unfamiliar roads
And I got demons….tracking me down

What can you gain from somebody like me?
I’m as broken as anyone can be.
I can’t give you something I aint never had.
Chorus:
I’m just trying to figure it all out.
I’m just trying the best to survive.
I don’t know what this life is all about.
But I see….me…in your eyes.

How can I answer all the questions you have?
I stand here bitter and scared from my past.
But I can seem to pull away from your gaze.
Chorus again
I’m just trying to figure it all out.
I’m just trying the best to survive.
I don’t know what this life is all about.
But I see….me…in your eyes.

I’m just trying to figure it all out.
I’m just trying the best to survive.
I don’t know what this life is all about.
But I see, what I can be…through your eyes.

#72543 by gbheil
Fri Jun 26, 2009 1:36 am
Best of luck Debbie.

#72555 by Debbiestrange
Fri Jun 26, 2009 2:37 am
sanshouheil wrote:Best of luck Debbie.


Thanks...what did you think of the song...honest opinion?

#72570 by Debbiestrange
Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:46 am
Ok, either the song really sucks and you all are too kind to critique it or it's just boring and...not worth a damn. 19 views...not looking good for the home team here....

That's ok...I like it...I think it will fit into the movie...has a catchy chorus....yeah, the recording sucks...but, I don't care...they judge on lyrics, how well it fits into the movie, and if chosen I'll record it on studio equipment.

I wrote another one for the movie...but kind of afraid to share it...so I think I'll wait on that.

Think I need some sleep...just wish I could sleep...

#72573 by ColorsFade
Fri Jun 26, 2009 4:59 am
Yeah, you gotta be from Michigan to qualify for the competition.

Debbie - judging from your vocals, you don't sound like you're from Michigan. Are you a transplant? You have a southern accent, at least it sounds like it to me.

#72574 by Debbiestrange
Fri Jun 26, 2009 5:00 am
ColorsFade wrote:Yeah, you gotta be from Michigan to qualify for the competition.

Debbie - judging from your vocals, you don't sound like you're from Michigan. Are you a transplant? You have a southern accent, at least it sounds like it to me.


I am from the south, but now a legal resident of Michigan.

#72576 by Jessica M
Fri Jun 26, 2009 5:30 am
Great job.
The content does seem to be good for the film, but I just keep thinking that it needs a little more dynamics in the vocal line or a second instrument.

Just a thought =)

#72579 by Debbiestrange
Fri Jun 26, 2009 5:35 am
Jessica M wrote:Great job.
The content does seem to be good for the film, but I just keep thinking that it needs a little more dynamics in the vocal line or a second instrument.

Just a thought =)


thank you for your advice...unfortunately..it's just me and my guitar. I'm wishing I had a 12 string...that would improve the guitar sound...

Hoping the judging goes by how well the song fits the movie...lyrics and how it applies to the situation. I've written a second one...but all the normal people are sleeping right now and I can record it properly...I MIGHT get opinions on it tomorrow.

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