#172442 by Jahva
Tue May 08, 2012 12:07 pm
Tue May 08, 2012 12:07 pm
LD,
Something else came to mind about this song and some of your others. You really should spend a little more time developing your intro's and outs. I know you're just demo-ing right now but your missing out on that added surprise to the song and it's conclusion. Plus it helps add shape to the over-all picture.
Keef was pretty good at adding some little phrase or line to get your attention before the band would kick in.
Just sayin...
Something else came to mind about this song and some of your others. You really should spend a little more time developing your intro's and outs. I know you're just demo-ing right now but your missing out on that added surprise to the song and it's conclusion. Plus it helps add shape to the over-all picture.
Keef was pretty good at adding some little phrase or line to get your attention before the band would kick in.
Just sayin...





