General Music Chat

Mary, I think about throwing you a track often. Something where you could SHINE! Something that gives you room to breathe! It will happen! Thanks for listening. And it does make sense.

That will be great.

good job overall, but the drums sound like ass

It's good job overalls.

good job overall, but the drums sound like ass

It's good job overalls.

LMAO!

good job overall, but the drums sound like ass

Yes, I've heard others say that too.

good job overall, but the drums sound like ass

It's good job overalls.

LMAO!

Sorry it took me so long to check this song out Paul.

I think it's catchy, and you did a fine job of bringing someone else's song to life. So... the first question is... "What did the old man (the writer) think?" I'm sure he was thrilled. What did he say?

I liked the harmonies and change ups.

I think the song itself needs something more. But that has more to do with the writing and arrangement than your performance of the song. The words are too repetitive and could benefit from telling a little more of a story. There are some good hooks and catchy memorable parts, but... that is what it sounds like to me a little... Some good ideas patched together. It could be tweaked and improved though, so that it is more cohesive and interesting throughout.

I thought you did a really good job with it.

Kudos!

Well thanks Craig. Glad you finally put your ears on it. I embellished a good bit on this one. I will try to post the original for reference when I find it.