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My Dream to make Music

The Music I Make Cannot be Heard, For No money to record

Only in trust in my words can you believe if im worth it

I will never post any audio on here, until it is copy written and Produced

For this reason many of you will turn me down

But if you would like to here a sample of my words

Then I shall make one up for you now

But if you try to steal them

Then I shall hunt you down

For too long eve waited, waited for an opportunity

To shine and be fated, to the endless lyres

Gone mad, braided my hair, wearing saggy jeans, fallen beneath me knee

Eve shed no tears, can reach my ears, and hear me as I pray, on faith....


So if you still decide him not good, then correct you are, for I represent my hood

Stars that are refugee to their own race

I am black, and blacken my heart is, eye for eye and nigh my heart beats

I will say... i will say, my name is Nathan K. Payne.....

Your rhyming is adolescent, & so is your "dream" if you don't do anything to show your willingness to work for it. Go back to sleep. Maybe tonight you'll dream of being an investment banker or a lumberjack. Then you can go to someone else & ask for the funds to back your new dream.

If Eve were there, she'd probably tell you to get a job & work to make your dreams come true.

No...not a lumberjack. What was I thinking? That WOULD be too much like work, wouldn't it?

You'd make a much better garden gnome or gargoyle. Then you would have all the time in the world to sit around & dream as much as your little heart desires.

Mr. Payne, what the hell are you posting in the U.K. section for??????

He's an international beggar, cuz the whole world's his hood!

That's some international bullshit....

Try to steal them ?????

PA - LEEEZE !!!!!!!!!!!!

Who would want them.. LOL !

Seriously dude, did you really end that with..

''So if you still decide him not good, then correct you are, for I represent my hood
Stars that are refugee to their own race
I am black, and blacken my heart is, eye for eye and nigh my heart beats
I will say... i will say, my name is Nathan K. Payne.....''



They have to be some of the most desperate "Give the people what they want" lyrics I've ever heard!



GJ