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A New Song-"Another Day in July"

PostPosted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 2:13 pm
by The Writer
It was another day in July,
the sun was scorching down,
and it was hotter than Hades,
so hot, it would make a grown man cry.
I was in the town of Grantham,… Grantham, Pa,
when I gave my life to the Lord I gave my soul on my own accord!
It was on the banks of the Yellow Breeches,
at Messiah College, an institute of higher learning., a place set in the hills of P-A.
In the beginning it was hot, then I felt a breeze, things started to cool down, and I felt a pain in my knee. In my knee!

The wind came and almost knocked me to the ground, then there was a rumble in the sky, and the old devil :twisted: said "my, my!"
He also said,” don’t give your life to the Lord, but instead give it to me, I'm the genie in the bottle, and I' all you all you need.
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But my mind was made up!
I would not be denied. I had a date with destiny, and I believed in the Word. The lightening came, and folks ran for the Red Bridge at the Yellow Breeches River, but like I said, “I had a destiny, and I would not be late! The sky lit up, and the wind started to howl, and the trees started to bend and shake. (Eyes bulging out effect and have your cheeks puffed up out phillie)
Birds flew for cover, but 37 brave souls stood their ground, then Lewis joined the group and said "I was lost, but now I'm found." One by one, we marched like soldiers in the river to Pastor Wade, the river was muddy, water to our waist

But ...we had come too far, to be turned back by a little storm, we had waited for this day.

By Rev Philybymon :D [

Re: A New Song-"Another Day in July"

PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:51 am
by Andragon
The Writer wrote:The sky lit up, and the wind started to howl...

.. out of your ass!

PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:28 am
by Shredd6
You know Charles, I don't think you're networking to the right forum. here's one with a lot of Christians on it where I think you can gain some more traffic. Possibly even fans.

http://www.headfreaks.com/forums/index.php

It's worth a try.

PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 8:01 pm
by fisherman bob
Put a song together PLEASE. You constantly send us to your electronic song machine "compositions" with NO VOCALS or you send us song lyrics with NO MUSIC. Can you possibly send us a COMBINATION OF THE TWO TOGETHER AS IN A REAL SONG WITH REAL VOCALS? You call yourself The Writer. You should call yourself The Music Sampler & Lyric Writer. You haven't proven to anybody here that you are any kind of legitimate songwriter. It's long overdue for you to compose a REAL SONG, your learning period should be over by now...

PostPosted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 8:47 pm
by Chippy
Actually and oddly enough I come to the writers defence. We all use effects, made up by someone else. Ask WahWah.

The thing however with this is that the effect is not used in some different way, organized and syncopated.

Sorry I'm having a bad day today. Perhaps the clouds opened for a tad? Dunno. I'm human. Soz