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Would You-All Critique my little ole intro 4 me?
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 5:56 amby ZXYZ
it's only 24 seconds of your life...
'Hvymtl09' (track1)
thank ya!!
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 8:40 amby AlexanderN
I assume that it is actually 8 seconds long - correct?
I like the tone/effect combination you use there. Sounds like you somehow do it on a keyboard. It is nothing like I have heard yet. And I have no idea ho to reproduce it. This is why I like it. Original sounding tone. It is heavy yet it is not evil. The drum track would be replaced with the real drum of cause doing that high speed HH. I would be nice to know what does it dive in to. Sounds like it is about to go in to something groovy. But then again I like the genre you work in - therefore I am not so good of a judge.
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 2:28 pmby philbymon
I like the tone, Z. Good big sound! I could see this intro going in innumerable directions. Where will you take it?
Alex - I got 24 seconds, but they were an 8 second thing repeated 3 times, so perhaps you're right...LOL
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 5:15 pmby ZXYZ
I gotta quit posting after drinks
but thanks you guys. I have an idea sort-of-maybe where its going. nothing concrete yet. The drums are looped 3 times, the guitars are not tho. So, sort of 3 8 second riffs or measures if u can call 'em that... Just an intro though.. Thanks for listening
Thats my present project. Posted prematurely. Premature Postation.
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 5:38 pmby Starfish Scott
I just don't like the stop in the middle.
Sounds like you are about to go into a slighly heavier version of I AM ONE off of GISH
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 6:24 pmby ZXYZ
Hmm.. it does resemble 'I am one', slightly. The rest of it wont, though.
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 8:45 pmby Andragon
Reminds me of Iommi's low-E bends.
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 1:11 amby ZXYZ
Yeh Tony Iommi was def an influence on me.
Thanks guys for the input, especially for a <1/2 minute intro clip. I'll try to start working on the rest of it straight away. If anybody's interested. I'll post it up. I'll probly try to do vox again so get ready to cover yur ears
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 5:16 amby ZXYZ
I just added a little bit to it...
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:39 pmby Kramerguy
it's odd to me. Don't know why. Only critique I can come up with is that there's too much chorus on the guitar after the intro, like you're trying to do headbanging metal notes/chords with a glam metal tone.
The intro is definitely unique, and does show a Iommi influence, but you certainly made it your own. I'd totally look forward to hearing the next update or re-work of that tune.
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Wed Jan 07, 2009 8:40 pmby ZXYZ
Hopefully it'll be better after bass and vocals are added. Thanx for the inputs. Headbanger Glam band. Hey I like that!! Yeah some re-working will def be needed.
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Thu Jan 08, 2009 12:19 amby EDDY123
ME LIKE, Good job cant wait to here moore PEACE
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Thu Jan 08, 2009 3:23 amby ZXYZ
Thanks Eddy, I appreciate that!!
I hope I can come up with a good "rest-of-the-song"..
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Oh, and Y'-all, I'm a 'Glam-Rocker' now so I gotta go get my mascara ..
-just hope I dont end up looking like Dee Snyder..
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Thu Jan 08, 2009 3:24 amby AlexanderN
Glam it man!
Does not have to be an outfit - it is the sound that Glams.
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Thu Jan 08, 2009 5:21 amby ZXYZ
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Thanks you-all for the input! Everybody!!
( I gotta watch what i post sometimes) -heh-
"Glam it man!" -Alex, thats cool. That could be an album -er CD name!!
Can I use that?
Thanks for the additional vote of confidence. I'll continue to work on that song
-oh and btw, here is some of what i deleted -lol-
(and I'm glad I did) ..
