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new music

PostPosted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 6:58 pm
by bothhandsbroken1@aol.com
new music up please listen and tell me what you think i NEED criticism, im sure someone can think of something to say.. thanks again
Josiah Majka
From york pennsylvania
(solo musician)
to find me go to the main page, put in the zipcode 17402 and look for
"bothhandsbroken@" and you may have to download them. thank you for your time everyone.

PostPosted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 7:10 pm
by philbymon
Looked on your profile. It said "No audio available."

Put 'em in MP3 format in order to upload them here in BM.

Good luck & welcome to the forum.

PostPosted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:55 pm
by Kramerguy
Philby, he uploaded .m4a (ran in quicktime on my PC)format, they are in the audio/video tab of his page.


Josiah,
I really like the For Lilly 'concept' although the execution is harsh. The lead sounds pitchy at points, like the guitar is out of tune. I used to hear this in my own playing when I was still 'green' on lead. If you can hear what I'm talking about, then you are well on your way to improving, but if you can't, The best advice I can offer is to work on your vibrato. The recording itself obviously is really basement quality, but I bet you already knew that. I won't fuss over that.

I LOVE the progressions you came up with though.. it seems your writing skills have outpaced your physical skills.

PostPosted: Thu Dec 04, 2008 5:51 pm
by bothhandsbroken1@aol.com
yes i know it wasnt the greatest recording but you also have to remember it was a fresh jam session with old band mates that split for about two years. haha i know we are way rusty and these are my first couple songs put on here. i will have new songs in acouple days so you may see what im really about. thank you for your criticism i see these flaws but im not sure how to fix them. maybe a little advice? oh and the songs were recorded from an apple macbook. just one single mic. ha.

PostPosted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 12:49 am
by ZXYZ
It helps to put a clickable link (doesnt take more than a minute) on the bottom of your post. Asking busy musicians to go search for you with a zip code etc
to find me go to the main page, put in the zipcode 17402 and look for
"bothhandsbroken@" and you may have to download them.

Is not going to get you many responses.

PostPosted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 8:12 pm
by Robin1
ZXYZ wrote:It helps to put a clickable link (doesnt take more than a minute) on the bottom of your post. Asking busy musicians to go search for you with a zip code etc
to find me go to the main page, put in the zipcode 17402 and look for
"bothhandsbroken@" and you may have to download them.

Is not going to get you many responses.


ZXYZ, all you have to do is click on the picture of the person who is in the forum boards. You will be taken to his bandmix site. 8)

PostPosted: Sat Dec 06, 2008 8:54 pm
by ZXYZ
Uh, well, yeah.. i kinda did know that much..
I was talking about the zip code thing.

PostPosted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 11:36 am
by Crip2Nite
....why are most of your pics are one's looking up your nostrils?? :?

PostPosted: Wed Dec 10, 2008 2:35 pm
by jw123
Somebodys proud of their nose!