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PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 2:24 pm
by Kramerguy
sounds good. I especially liked the B-52's feel of Grab It. You are correct on the vocals, no offense, but they aren't doing you any favors.

PostPosted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 6:42 pm
by ZXYZ
Yeah, good! Nice chord progressions. Creative. I like the rich sound of the keyboards.

PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 1:53 am
by Starfish Scott
Talking Heads meets Col. Les Claypool.

PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:28 pm
by ZXYZ
http://www.myspace.com/thereallesclaypool

John the fisherman is an interesting song.. :shock:

PostPosted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 5:30 pm
by jimmydanger
Sailing the Seas of Cheese

PostPosted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 3:13 am
by Andragon
Never heard of Claypool???
Wow. You haven't heard much bass or seen arrogance yet, have you?

PostPosted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:02 pm
by philbymon
SP, I'm listening to "SP." Yeah, it's midi. You really need to play this in a higher key for your voice. I like the arrangement, & it will sound better if & when you use different & "real" instruments. In my head I hear a full choir on the "Sentient Paradox" line, for some reason.

"Grab It" is pretty cool, & it also needs better instruments. It could be a really exciting piece. Needs rhythm & lead guitar. It's more in your vocal range, too.

Good songs, both. I'd love to produce you, SP. Your stuff is interesting & challenging.

PostPosted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:38 pm
by Andragon
Sentient Paradox wrote:I've been listening to rock for over forty years. Of course I've seen arrogance, and a lot of it!

True, but not the Claypool kinda arrogance..