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Posted:
Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:04 am
by fretwork
Sentient you’ve already highlighted in your post the improvements that the song needs, normally when I listen to music on BandMix don’t pay much attention to the production aspect coz we all know there is always room for improvement, instead I concentrate on the composition of the song which reflects the ability of the song writer. You can right song man in spite of the title you are not crazy, I liked it.

Posted:
Fri Nov 07, 2008 11:19 am
by Chippy
Which Song is it Sentient please?

Posted:
Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:52 pm
by philbymon
Um...Chippy? Look at the title of this thread.
SP, I think you are a little crazy, but I like your stuff. Wish the vox were up a tad more so I could get all the wordses.
I like the way you write around your voice, which is a pure & honest one, if not truly versatile & great. You have a style all your own, & a lot of us don't really have that yet.
A challenge for you -> write a blues, an emo, a bluegrass, or a '60's style pop song & record it. I bet you can, & can make it work, in your own style.

Posted:
Fri Nov 07, 2008 3:47 pm
by Chippy
Wull yah, thanks Phil. Not on Sentients site. Didn't realize it was on his profile page. Thanks for making me look............
philbymon wrote:Um...Chippy? Look at the title of this thread.

Posted:
Fri Nov 07, 2008 3:59 pm
by Chippy
Love it Sentient and I think that's #1 favorite that your composed so far. I like the little piggy singing thing as backup.
There was one guitar note that sounded off somewhere in the Chorus line. Not being picky at all really, it just sounded a little flat. (2nd guitar?)
I wish I could do what you do with midi.


Posted:
Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:06 pm
by RhythmMan
Sentient Paradox, add "mix 1," "Mix 2," etc. - to the song title, and you'll never have to remember which copy is where.

Posted:
Fri Nov 07, 2008 9:52 pm
by J-HALEY
Hey Sentient, I like your song. I think the delay in the end chorus is a little to much, I would adjust that a little untill the very last word and then leave it like it is, and I like your use of the stereo feild (panning) to prevent frequency masking, after doing a lot of studio work over the years I noticed early on how the really good engineers concentrate on this and how much it vary's depending on the song. Something that I am still trying to master. An engineer once told me "sometimes it's not a matter of turning the vocals up, but turning everything else down" typically I will leave the vocals 3 to 5 db above the instruments.

Posted:
Sat Nov 08, 2008 12:20 am
by ZXYZ
I like it!!


Posted:
Tue Nov 11, 2008 9:01 pm
by J-HALEY
Sounds a lot better, I still think the vocals should stand out just a tad more.