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I started to play after 15 years & first time in my life I was recording being sober ex. www.mroze.bandcamp.com so... thx God it doesn't sound sweetly! if I woke up I'll do something 'bout it is there somebody after a brake?

Not my kind of music, but it's recorded well. Is it supposed to have that slowed-down place at the end of the verse? Not sure your family would be happy about you wanting to kill someone (but I don't know your family!)

yeah, I considered this song.. I hope so my assumption was - fast, raw, briefly & emotionally; I usually compose 'more complex' songs, still looking for my sound was enough to buy budget equipment to sound different every way is good; aaand my family is fine I think...

I also took a 15+ year break. Glad to be back or at least writing again.

As for the song it's a good starting point. Has a good drive to it... And you seem happy with it. Just keep writing and enjoy the ride.
Good luck to you.

thx Jahva and good luck to you; the most difficult was to learn pro tools in a short time now the world is wide open I don't care to be in vogue and this is probably the most successful... freedom rules!