Warning: Acoustic/Love song

Posted:
Sat Jun 29, 2013 1:41 pm
by Jahva
Harmonica included...
New tune called "Story of us" First on my player... with lyrics.
Yeah it's kind of mushy so you've been warned!


Posted:
Sat Jun 29, 2013 10:36 pm
by GuitarMikeB
Title on the player is 'Storyt ...'
Vocals need to come up in the mix, mostly in the first verse, but a little throughout.
Like the harmonica lead part (bring its volume up a little, too), might work to put a little of that at the start as well.
Think you need to do something for the ending, it kind of falls apart the way you end it - another harmonica lead part and fade out might work.

Posted:
Sun Jun 30, 2013 12:05 am
by gbheil
I'm not much on chick flicks or love songs.
It's a workable format . . . sure the ladies will love it.
Thanks for the music.

Posted:
Mon Jul 01, 2013 2:03 pm
by Jahva
Thanks for the input guys!
I'll do a little tweak on the mix Mike. I had the Harmonica ride out to the end but it seemed to fight with the vocal so I ended it sooner.
Thanks again.