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#206471 by Jahva
Mon Feb 25, 2013 1:33 am
One of the music sites I visit has a monthly song challenge where the winner selects what the following months challenge will be. huh? Anyway the February challenge requires the song to be in 4/4, no more than 3 chords allowed and not longer than 3 minutes in length.
Oh and you have to use the word Hamster, a half bottle of Scotch and Ukelele in the lyrics. :shock:
I don't usually enter these things but seemed like it would be fun. First thoughts were a country kind of 1 4 5 deal but it seemed too obvious so I came up with something a little darker.
It's called Ukelele first song on my player. Any critiques good bad whatever have at it. I've got a few days left to tweak it. Don't know if getting others opinions is allowed but I'll mention it when I submit it.

The lyrics are posted on the page as well.
Peace!

#206487 by gbheil
Mon Feb 25, 2013 3:39 am
Why do I have visions of dancing singing raisins in my head . . .

Dark, yes.
Other than the aforementioned raisin comment, very original.

I could not even imagine trying to write under the hindrance of "prerequisites".

But you did quite a good job.

Kudos

#206580 by Jahva
Mon Feb 25, 2013 6:16 pm
Thanks for checking it out Sans... I know it's nothing special. But it was fun to watch it evolve... especially coming up with the required lyrics.
Rasins ahhhh... the grapevine groove! I can see where you coming from. Probably should replace the accordion with an electric piano. :shock:

#206592 by jimmydanger
Mon Feb 25, 2013 8:13 pm
Good job! I would suggest only one small change to the words:

instead of "Her eyes they once were as blue as as blue as a summer sky"

"Her eyes they once were as blue as a cloudless summer sky"

#206605 by GuitarMikeB
Mon Feb 25, 2013 10:36 pm
Good use of the restrictions on the song content. Did they mis-spell "ukulele" or did they? :lol: Your other songs are better, for sure.

I've only written 2 complete songs based on 'requirements', beside when I went to the songwriting thingie, but only the themes were specified in those. If someone told me 'write a song about hamburgers', it would just suck because I wouldn't feel it.

#206610 by Jahva
Mon Feb 25, 2013 11:49 pm
Ukulele.... oy that would be me.
Was a good exercise.
Like i said nothing special but it did get me thinking because of the restrains. Chords are one thing but specific words... And finding a way to tie them together in the end was the challenge for me.
Thanks for listening guys.
JD Good call... that was an odd line using "as" 4 times. :shock:

#206709 by Jahva
Tue Feb 26, 2013 11:44 pm
Thanks J7!
It was... fun... thematic wise anyways.
Dark... yeah... a lost love and alcohol can do crazy things to the mind. :shock: well at least in the movies. :P
Thanks again for listening.

#206827 by Jahva
Thu Feb 28, 2013 1:49 pm
Thanks for giving a listen Yod!
Demented... sure why not. Kind of like writing B horror movie music. 8)

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