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I would love to see the chord progresssions as well, that is generally how I build the music I write, a basic progression and build from there. Sans.

Hey Sans, that's how I do it as well, as I said to gtZip I worked on your lyrics after you posted'em, I have the song finished with vocals and even added a new verse to make it fit the musical scheme I came up with.

I haven't posted because I belive the younger guys can make your song more contemporary as opposed to some baby boomer's idea.

To me new original lyrics has to effect of a lure to a fish, tired of playing cover tunes I get my fun making up my own stuff. Your song has provided me with couple of days of fun.

Those lyrics came from the psychotic dream of a 48 year old. I really would like to hear what you did with it. If you dont want to post it hell send it to me. I,m all ears.