United States

Hey, I've got a few songs I'm working on that I wanted to get some feedback on.

I put them up at purevolume.com/tmbf

Right now its just the guitar. I just wanted you guys thought of the direction I'm traveling with them. (The second and 3rd song are suppose to just flow together back to back to compliment the lyrics I wrote for them.

Also, theres a link there to a song I put on youtube that I'm convinced I heard before that I played... Its pretty sketchy, but maybe you could tell me what song it is... if you heard it.

Thanks.

Bleezie

TBMF - if you want me to listen, & many others as well, it's better to just transfer the things into MP3 format & put 'em up on your profile. Other sites, esp ones that I'm unfamiliar with, are ones I don't usually check out, & I never heard of that one.

While you're at it, it may help a lot to fill out your profile with your influences & equipment list & such. It looks pretty stripped down for a profile, to me. Making things more complete wil help in your search for other members through this & other sites, even if you're just looking for good criticisms & conversations.

Good luck.

I don't see any songs, nothing in the audio-video tab, and no myspace link

It sounds like you have some good starts and ideas, but I think you are using too many effects on the tone. The first song needs a bit more structuring work. The guitar duet thing in the beginning sounds a little sloppy...almost like they are not suppose to be played together and some of the dissonance gets to be a little much in areas. It's a good start. =) If you want more feed back though, you will have to post it on your profile on here. =)