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#225696 by Jahva
Tue Nov 12, 2013 12:11 am
Sorry nothing for you wannabe poltico's... :P just a song bout those that stretch it a bit!
A subject like this can be written a lot of different ways I guess... I took the lying cheating woman approach... just for fun. Nobody got hurt in the making of it.
This is a first mix so any comments critques... have at it.
As my friend Lynard would say "I aint skeerd"!

First on my player with the lyrics.

#225701 by zar535135
Tue Nov 12, 2013 1:24 am
Sounds Good

#225703 by MikeTalbot
Tue Nov 12, 2013 1:29 am
Damn Jahva - I wish you were closer. I'd put down my guitar and grab my bass! This song is exactly the kind of thing I enjoy playing! :D

Good lead there too! This tune really works for me..

Talbot

#225738 by Starfish Scott
Tue Nov 12, 2013 3:58 pm
Yep, you did it again. GJ!

Nice material. You know to me, that tune sounds like NEW COUNTRY.

And if that was what they are talking about, I'd listen to it.
It's very easy to listen to and that's awesome.
(Regular new country makes me ill, I vote for your new version.)

I am not 100% on the title, but I am at a loss for something better.

I keep thinking about "Pocketful of Alibis/Lies and Alibis/Lies, Why's and Alibis" something like that but the tune is solid enough.

Good Job, as usual.

#225742 by gbheil
Tue Nov 12, 2013 4:51 pm
Well done. A little too country for my preference, enjoyable none the less.

Thanks.

#225750 by Planetguy
Tue Nov 12, 2013 6:04 pm
YEAH! that's great. wow...one great line after another! i really dig the music too.

doesn't strike me as country at all. well, maybe some of the gtr stuff put me in a little in mind of the Byrds but that AIN'T a bad thing.

i think ya got a winner there, jahva!

#225772 by Jahva
Tue Nov 12, 2013 11:29 pm
I appreciate you guys taking the time and your comments. Was a fun little tune.
It does have a touch of Country-Americana about it. Between the bass line and the Strat pup position to give it a bit o' twang. :P
But I like those sounds on some tunes.
It was an interesting subject. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for a lyrical idea.
I was tempted to make it political song considering... well they're all a bunch of lying sons a beotches... but then I thought nah.... that's someone else idea of fun :wink:
Thanks again for checking it out!

#225803 by GuitarMikeB
Wed Nov 13, 2013 2:52 am
Another uptempo hit! :D During the chorus (lies lies lies) and lead guitar part I think the bass could go into a 'walking bass' line, rather than the root/5th pattern.

#225819 by Jahva
Wed Nov 13, 2013 12:50 pm
Thanks Mike.
I tried several approaches with the bass line during the little solo part but it kept coming out too close to the guitar line so I tried to stagger it in there. Everything else i tried, just seem to get lost in the mix. I still need to clean it up (vocals especially.) but I'll give it another try.
Thanks again 8)

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