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New demo on my profile player, did most of the tracking yesterday.

Reminds me of one your other tunes... Could be the key or the progression... I think maybe vocals/lyrics more than the music though. I couldn't quite decipher all the lyrics could you post them? Has a decent drive to it.

Like to hear the leads that are underneath the lyrics a little better. The "solos" were fine.
I was able to make out the lyrics a little better than on your last offering, still a little more out in front would not hurt IMO.

Nice groove . . .

As always ,thanks for posting music.

Thanks for listening and the comments. I figured Jahva would ask for the lyrics - I haven't typed them out yet, in fact they were just scrawls in random-written order when I tracked the vocals.
As I said, first mix, haven't even listened to it in my prime listening room (my truck) yet.

If the melody/vocals sound like another song, not sure which one, but its possible. Common problem, I think when you write a bunch of songs but then 'forget them' after recording.
Listening to Todd Rundgren's latest CD, 'State', he duplicates some lines/melodies to some his past stuff a few times, and at other times you can tell he is thrown 'weird' melody notes in to get it to sound different.