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Hi, I just wanted to get your opinion on some songs I performed.

Thanks for your time. (I'm not a singer by any stretch of the word.)

Therapist
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X8CQiHLT ... ure=relmfu

Judy Garland (I'm working on lyrics for the verses.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NELmSmus ... ideo_title

If you posted them here, I'd listen; not gonna surf the web.

Hi, I just wanted to get your opinion on some songs I performed.

Thanks for your time. (I'm not a singer by any stretch of the word.)

Therapist
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X8CQiHLT ... ure=relmfu

Judy Garland (I'm working on lyrics for the verses.)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NELmSmus ... ideo_title

THERAPIST: Song got potential... You are new to this... Sme things to focus on:
Voice: Need to practice , was a bit outta tune. Not deaf ears, but just need more strength and control of oxygen in the lyrics.

SonG Structure: Nice crescendo effect...Tells me you got a sense of dramatic, which is good. Needs a bridge.

Lyrics: Words are like battles, ..got to choose them wisely. and Mine fields make a fella need ta step -lightly Newbies tend to feel their way around, not sure of the footing.. Again practice and time will cure that.
Just stay on it, you'll make good things come out of it.